My favorite sport篇二：
　　I like doing sports very much.My favourite sport is swimming.I often go to swim with my good friend Lily.She likes swimming ,too.And she is very good at it.She always swims better than me.When I am swimming in the pool,I am very happy.I look like a lovely fish in the pond.I enjoy swimming,because swimming can make me strong and healthy.It can also bring me a lot of happiness.Of course,I like watching this sport.I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.
　　My favorite sport篇三：
　　There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy,such as swimming,running,and dancing.However,the sport that I like most is basketball.When I was in junior high,I started to play basketball in school.At that time,I found I had loved deeply this sport.Now,I would like to watch basketball games as much as I can.The basketball games have given me the most wonderful time in my life.

　My favorite sport篇三：

　My favorite sport is basketball. It looks so cool TV. I have been crazy about those basketball stars, especially Yao Ming, ever since I was a child. Basketball requires speed, height and skills. All parts of my body are exercised in this sport. Furthermore, basketball is a sport more than just exercising. It is teamwork. No one can play himself. A team should work together. So I learn to cooperate with others in this game. I play basketball twice a week. I make many good friends through this sport.

我最喜欢的运动 My Favorite Sport 4

关于tennis关于慢跑关于网球比赛关于超级粉丝
I like to do all kinds of sports, in the morning, I will do some jogging and in the evening, sometime I will go to the gym with my friends. My favorite sport is playing tennis, tennis brings my life so much happiness, I can watch the match while talking to my friends happily. To do the sport will improve my health and make me catch up with the time.
我喜欢做各种各样的运动，早上，我会做一些慢跑，在晚上，有时候我会和朋友去体育馆。我最喜欢的运动是打网球，网球给我的生活带来了很多的乐趣，我可以一边和朋友愉快地聊天，一边看网球比赛。做运动可以改善我的健康状况，让我与时俱进。
When I was small, one day, when I went home after school, I felt bored and opened the TV, then I saw the tennis match. Two beautiful girls were playing intensively, the game was so excellent, I couldn’t move my eye away from the match. From then on, I started to fall in love with tennis, I watched many matches and got to know more about the game.
当我还小的时候，一天，当我放学回家后，我觉得很无聊，打开电视机，然后看到了网球比赛。两个美丽的女孩子正在激烈地打着球，比赛很精彩，我的目光无法转移。从那时候起，我开始爱上了网球，我看了很多网球比赛，对网球有了更多的了解。

Tennis sport is the combination of power and asthetics. The tennis players dress the beautiful clothes and their power make the ball fly quickly. The other tennis players will return the tennis ball with their rightly power. The game is so wonderful, if we watch the match alive.
网球运动是力与美的结合。网球运动员穿着美丽的衣服，他们的力量让球快速飞走。另一个网球运动员会正确地使用他们的力量，让球返回去。比赛很精彩，如果我们在现场看的话。
 

My favourite sport 5

    As we know, sport is an important part of our life.I am interested in sport and I do sports every day.
   My favourite sport is swimming. It is a healthy and popular sport and I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old. Although I am a little nervous in the water at first, with the help of my parents and coach, I could swim well after several weeks. Now, I am very good at swim and I go swimming over three times a week. As far as I am concemed ,swimming in the water is cool and exciting. During the summer holidays,I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time.
    Swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment.
批改：
1. It is a healthy and popular sport and I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old. 这两句简单句应该拆分,独立成句更好。去掉and ,换成句点。
2. Although I am a little nervous in the water at first, with the help of my parents and coach, I could swim well after several weeks. 说当年学游泳的事，应该用一般过去时。I am 改成I was .
3. Now, I am very good at swim and I go swimming over three times a week. 句型错误，be good at (doing )sth.此处swim 应该为swimming 。
4. As far as I am concemed 单词拼写错误 应该改为concerned.
参考例句:
(文)善长做某事  be good at (doing )sth
He is good at cooking
作文-地带点评:
作为初三学生的习作，作者有着比较好的语言组织能力，语言简洁，选词精准，句子表达也相对较标准，内容连贯，条理清晰，能熟练使用连接词，使文章更有整体性，连贯性，这点值得肯定.但有个别句子有语法、词法错误，但只要细心加勤动笔，相信今后的文章会更长更漂亮！